Day 1:When I first moved to this school I made a lot of Japanese friend one of my Japanese friend told me a rumors I was shocked about the rumors at midnight I text-ed my virtual parent to stay at school they say it okay as long if I'm not hurt okay so I stayed at 8:00pm at night and my teacher asked me why are you here? I said to her I heard a rumors about this school she said pfft that not going to happen now go home so i pretend I go home by hiding at the concession stand & by that time all light I shut off & the bell ring & it was 11:00pm at midnight I was shaking so badly I saw my friend walking with a flashlight he handed me it & asked me if I can go on a paranormal activity so I did I search around the school a drip coming above my head it was water I look at the ceiling & investigate it my Japanese friend said that it come out of nowhere I look at the hallway window & notice that there somebody watching us my Japanese friend told me that it the gang leader she watch us every midnight I even heard a stomping sound or somebody banging the window I asked what is that to my friend he replied nobody know as I entered the classroom I notice hand-print on the window & some smell of toxic asbestos damaging my lung my friend quickly handed me a gas mask & I continue to search around the classroom I notice some type of black shadow running around the field really fast I notice a strange voice with an evil laugh when it was 5:00pm in the morning I heard the bell do somebody forgot to shut off the bell? Anyway I was really scared when I entered the school at midnight
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When I first moved to this school, I made a lot of Japanese friends. One of my Japanese friends told me a rumor I was shocked about. At about midnight, when I texted my virtual parent, they said "It will be okay, as long as you're not hurt."
So I stayed at 8:00 PM at night and my teacher asked me "Why are you here?" I said to her "I heard a rumor about this school." She said "Pfft, that's not going to happen. Now go home."
So I pretended to go home by hiding at the concession stand. By that time, all of the lights were shut off & the bell rang. It was 11:00 PM. I was shaking so badly until I saw my friend walking with a flashlight in his hand. He handed me the flashlight & asked me if I can go on a "paranormal activity."
So I accepted his offer. I searched around the school. A drop of water fell above my head. I look at the ceiling & investigated it. My friend said "That came out of nowhere!" I look at the hallway window & notice that there was somebody watching us investigate the school. My friend told me "That is the gang leader. She watches us every night."
That's when I heard a stomping sound or somebody banging against the window. I asked him "What is that?" He replied, "Nobody knows who that is."
As I entered the classroom, I noticed handprints on the window. Some horrific smell of toxic asbestos were damaging my lungs. My friend quickly handed me a gas mask & I continued to search. Around the classroom, I notice some type of shadow running around the field really quick. Then, I heard a strange, laughing evilly. When it was 5:00 AM in the morning, I heard the bell ring. Did somebody forgot to shut off the bell? I was really scared when I entered the school that morning.
Day 2: Coming Soon
I don't understand this, everything is so tight together. I'll try fixing everything. Fixed. This is a nice story you're putting together here.
I don't understand any of this, it's like... I can't even explain it. (I'll try to fix what best I can.)
When I first moved to this school I made a lot of Japanese friends. One of my Japanese friends told me about a rumor floating around school. I was shocked to what I had heard. I decided to spend the night. Night time rolled around, I decided it was best that I text-ed my virtual parents to notify them that I was spending the night at school. They said it was alright as long as I don't get hurt. I hung up and looked at the clock on my cell phone, 8:00 PM it read. My teacher who I assumed went home gave me quite a scare, asking me what I was doing here at this time of night. I explained to her about a rumor at this school. She told me that there weren't any rumors and told me to go home. (That's all I'm going to fix. Yes I did change a few things so it could make better sense. Sorry)
PS. It's a good story, just needs fixing.
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