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Treasure Hunter
Registered: 03/05/2006
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Re: Killzone[G]

Jul 5, 2008

Needs less contrast star

 

You just need to make the background black.  And the green clashes with the red too much.

Centered focals seem boring to me.... but thats just me. 

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Fender Bender
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Re: Killzone[G]

Jul 6, 2008

megarules wrote:

 

I started making different styles,seeing PX and Star doing different works made me feel doing something "newer".


Overall I think its pretty nice but I think the colors dont work so well. Maybe if you apply a gradient and make the color scheme a bit more consistant, it might be a bit more appealling. Like i said previosly, the sig is nice. The text works well too and I dont say this often. I like the use of different elements but the colors are just in need of a bit of work. Like your current where you have sharp colors along with staturated colors. Additionally, as someone mentioned previosuly, the prespective blur doesn't work because naturally, you would expect the blur to be on the right side as well since the render is the middle.

To you I would suggest making lp's. Take something and try to make it realistic. You will progress much further.


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Fender Bender
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Re: Killzone[G]

Jul 6, 2008

I personally love it !! Great Work

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Lombax Warrior
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Re: Killzone[G]

Jul 6, 2008
nice indeed
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Re: Killzone[G]

Jul 8, 2008
It's pretty good. Good job
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