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Re: My first shirt for PSASBR

Aug 1, 2012

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i love the shirt though, even if you can't sell them or anything, reminds me somewhat of the old i pod commercials ;p. Hope to see superbot selling t shirts soon for the game, i know id buy some :smileyvery-happy:


You gave me a banner idea XD

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Re: My first shirt for PSASBR

Aug 1, 2012

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With the blank spot you should simply insert the PSN ID of the person purchasing it. If this is what you plan to do (sell it.) Just a simple suggestion. It would make good use of it and tie everything in together.

 

I'd give this an honest 6.5/10


Not a bad, however I don't know if ill be selling it due to possible copy right laws. Any suggestions on what I can improve. 


1. It's a tad to busy. You need a little more flow. But the concept is good.

 

2. Yes copyright laws would be infringed I believe even if it's just a silhouette. You'd have to be quite creative with working around this. However, truthfully, if all you are doing is selling this to a few people you don't have much to worry about. It's when you start making an impact that's when it becomes a problem.

 

Note: I need to look at it again so hold on.


So your saying make the shapes more uniform? 


Yep, I edited my intial post. But essentially a pattern and a starting point. Once you catch the viewers attention it's simply a matter of having them look long enough to see most if not all of the shirt. That's what gets people to say "I like that." Otherwise the only people who will take a chance to look at the entire concept have an interest prior, or have been told to.


Thanks for the tips, ill fix up this shirt and when the full game comes up ill put together another. 

 

Just wondering, but what's your graphics background, you seem to know a think or two. 

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OOOOOOO preeety can you make a back ground pretty plz
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OOOOOOO preeety can you make a back ground pretty plz

I did a few uncharted backgrounds back in the day, and I actually have one that's been in progress for a few months along with 2 other requests. 

 

But yea I could see myself doing much more artwork for this game, heck if I could make a few $ here and there I would be more then willing. 

 

past backgrounds 

 

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/706/uncharted3wallpaper2.jpg/

 

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/192/unchartedwallpaperwitht.jpg/

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Jak looks like sweet tooth
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Jak looks like sweet tooth

yea that's his first model I believe, however you can tell it's jak because of dexter

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SB should make "team" shirts like "team jak", "team santa monica", "team sucker punch", "team big daddy". Just a thought.
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SB should make "team" shirts like "team jak", "team santa monica", "team sucker punch", "team big daddy". Just a thought.

i thought about making those too 

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Aug 1, 2012
you must make one for me :smileyvery-happy:
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Main complain about it is Kratos. His legs just randomly stop... all the other characters seem to fit in nicely :smileyhappy:
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