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Re: Jak and Daxter's Story Mode Beginning

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Oh! I gotcha! Thanks Smiley Happy

Also everybody! I'm in the process of making Fat Princess' story opening! And yes, it will go along with Crash's from my previous post featuring her :]

Don't worry though, for a "blind" written story about thee characters, you did pretty great. You nailed Jak and Daxter perfectly (Jak's more mature and serious, and does joke around sometimes, while Daxter tends to make fun of people, the funny guy, act tough when he's not, can be a bit of a coward but can break out of it, etc. You pretty much handled these qualities pretty well, I'm still amazed) and you did Cole pretty good for what you interpreted at the very least.

 

And good luck with Fat Princess!

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I like it but sweet tooth dosnt steal from people he murders people for fun besides he has alot of money from calypso in the newest game 

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I really enjoyed it, but, I think you introduced Cole perfectly.. there wasn't a real story behind why Cole was after Sweet Tooth (Unless its cutscene 2 than I apologize Smiley Happy ) and you introduced Jak.. rather hapilly and hes not the happiest (Unless he's enjoying vacation Smiley Very Happy

 

"...but now I understand that this is my life. There’s no going back. That the 'gift' of these powers would be my burden 'till the day I die."

                                                                           

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I really enjoyed it, but, I think you introduced Cole perfectly.. there wasn't a real story behind why Cole was after Sweet Tooth (Unless its cutscene 2 than I apologize Smiley Happy ) and you introduced Jak.. rather hapilly and hes not the happiest (Unless he's enjoying vacation Smiley Very Happy

And can I help you with cutscenes, I enjoy making them as well Smiley Happy

"...but now I understand that this is my life. There’s no going back. That the 'gift' of these powers would be my burden 'till the day I die."

                                                                           

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Thank you so much!! I appreciate the kind words! Smiley Happy
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Thank you for the Sweet Tooth info! I will edit the stuff Smiley Happy
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Thank you so much for the kind words, friend Smiley Happy
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Just make sweet tooth much much more darker  hes uber dark look at his twistd metal black story that will give u a good idea 

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Make a Sweet Tooth, and after Sackboy opening after Fat Princess, LOVE your work!!!!! Smiley Happy
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I really enjoyed it, but, I think you introduced Cole perfectly.. there wasn't a real story behind why Cole was after Sweet Tooth (Unless its cutscene 2 than I apologize Smiley Happy ) and you introduced Jak.. rather hapilly and hes not the happiest (Unless he's enjoying vacation Smiley Very Happy

And can I help you with cutscenes, I enjoy making them as well Smiley Happy

"...but now I understand that this is my life. There’s no going back. That the 'gift' of these powers would be my burden 'till the day I die."

                                                                           




Actually Jak can be pretty nice sometimes. I mean sure, he was revenge obsessed in Jak II, but in Jak 3 he calmed down and managed to become nicer and bond with Damos easily. He's just a big guy with a soft heart (But not in the overly happy, loves nature kind of way)

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