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Fat Princess's Story Mode Beginning

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(NOTE: I'd never played Fat Princess, nor Killzone, however, I know that Fat Princess likes to eat, and I know the whole idea of the game.)

 

 

Fat Princess sat in her thrown, in her new castle on 'Princess Island'.
"Princess, Princess!!" a voice yelled, flooding her throne room as a minion of hers rushed in. He kneeled down at her feet, bowed his head and announced, "They're gone! Your gems! They've been stolen!!"
"What?!" Fat Princess exclaimed in horror, "Bring me a pie, Minion #33! A cherry pie! And a blueberry pie! And seven apple fritters!"
"Yes Ma'am," the minion replied, "But what should I do about the gems?!"
"Oh! Right! Minion, I've just been getting these strange cravings lately. Call upon the prisoner we placed in prison last week! If he helps us get this intruder, I shall pardon him!"

"Yes, your majesty!" He bowed once more.
The minion ran down the hall, rushed into the storage room, and grabbed a heavy chest and placed it on a cart. He then rolled the cart out, ran down the hall and grabbed a key from the security room. He rushed to the royale dining hall, where hundreds of other minions sat and ate their daily meal, provided by the royale family; "Minions! A crafty racoon stole the Princess' gems! To your positions! Search the town, men! Every alley! Every nook! Every inch of that town!! I will follow shortly!"
The minions rushed out of the dining hall, haulting their meals and rushed out the front gates of the castle into the city.
 Minion #33 fled out of the room and rushed into the dungion where the prisoner was placed. Names were written on the dungion's doors;

Cell #1: StoneHand,  Cell #2: Recktor, Cell #3: Reynolds Trace, Cell #4 Kratos, Cell #5, Radac.

 

The minion passed the first five cells, finally reaching the fifth and unlocked Radac's cell, telling him the situation;
"Prisoner 5! The Princess agreed to pardon you, provided you can retrieve her stolen gems. He pulled the chest from the cart, and placed in next to the prisoner's cell.
"These are your belongings. Take them. Do you agree to the Princess' terms?"
Radac replied, "I do."

Radac rushed out the front gates, attempting to hunt down the intruder.


........................... Later..........................

"Your Majesty. Radac speaking. The racoon's been shot. He's in the water, unconscious as we speak."
"Your job is done. I want him alive so that I may personally make him countable for his crimes against the royale family."
"Thank you, Princess."
"Your pardon will be granted once you bring the racoon here alive, with the gems.".......... 

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Re: Fat Princess's Story Mode Beginning

Jul 16, 2012
(clap, clap) Never have I ever been so interested in new fan stories being posted every so often, I was waiting for this, so that tells you something. BTW, I don't think Fat Princess would be able to in prison Kratos, but maybe thats just being nit picky. Overall, GREAT JOB!
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Jul 16, 2012
Hahahahaha!! Thank you so much! Smiley Happy I really appreciate the kind words! And thank you for the information! I played GoW on the PSP, but I don't remember much of it. However, I'm sure I'll think up a reason as to why he becomes imprisoned Smiley Wink

Thank you so much again!

I'm currently writing Sackboy's! His will be up soon! I may even create a blog thing and upload all the starter stories on the site, and I'll probably expand on them so they can meet other characters and I'll write from their beginnings to their ends Smiley Happy
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Another excellent story from 333. I like the direction you went with for Fat Princess, not to mention Colonel Radec's involvement. Although, I am interested in how she got the God of War in a cell. Something tells me the explanation will be pretty interesting.

"A man's venom poisons himself more than his victims."
By the way, just call me Count for short.
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So, are you gonna tie all the stories together into 1 gigantic overall story? and are you gonna do villains as well cause I wanna read Sweet Tooth.?
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I think I'm going to write all their starter stories and then post those on the site. Then I'll update the rest of each characters full stories from beginning to finish and post them by character! Like, how do I say this... Have you ever played Budokai 3 or Sonic Adventure 2 Battle? Everyone has their own story and what I'm going to do is kind of... well... post each story from each character's point of view Smiley Tongue

And I guess I'll do villians, sure! ^^
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AWESOME!!! sounds epic, can't wait!!
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Thank you! Smiley Happy

It's almost 12am here, so my creativity is fading haha! But, I finished Sackboy's and I hope it's sufficient Smiley Tongue

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