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its homework for my literature class

 

Truman Capote

 

Truman Capote was the author of many books. I found information on the web and in the Holt book. Even though all his troubles during his child hood. He was an American, novelist, short story writer, and playwright.

 

Truman Capote was born in New Orleans as the son of a salesman. His parents divorced when he was only 4. After his parents divorced he moved with his relatives. His relatives sent him to military school when he was 12 and he was a sexual predator to older boys.

 

Once he got out of military school he started to write books.  His most famous book was Cold Blood. While some of his books gained fame some of them made it to the big screen and also to T.V.

 

Even though he had a rough childhood he still gave and effort. After his parents got divorced and divorced and he got out of military school he made a good decision to not give up             

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Looks good
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faster154 wrote:

its homework for my literature class

 

Truman Capote

 

Truman Capote was the author of many books. I found information on the web and in the Holt book. The sentence does not make sense to me.....Even though all his troubles during his child hood. He was an American, novelist, short story writer, and playwright.

 

Truman Capote was born in New Orleans as the son of a salesman. His parents divorced when he was only 4. After his parents divorced he moved with his relatives. His relatives sent him to military school when he was 12 and he was a sexual predator to older boys.

 

Once he got out of military school he started to write books.  His most famous book was Cold Blood. While some of his books gained fame some of them made it to the big screen and also to T.V.

 

Even though he had a rough childhood he still gave and effort. After his parents got divorced and divorced and he got out of military school he made a good decision to not give up             




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faster154 wrote:

its homework for my literature class

 

Truman Capote

 

Truman Capote was the author of many books. I found information on the web and in the Holt book. Even though all his troubles during his child hood. He was an American, novelist, short story writer, and playwright.

 

Truman Capote was born in New Orleans as the son of a salesman. His parents divorced when he was only 4. After his parents divorced he moved with his relatives. His relatives sent him to military school when he was 12 and he was a sexual predator to older boys.

 

Once he got out of military school he started to write books.  His most famous book was Cold Blood. While some of his books gained fame some of them made it to the big screen and also to T.V.

 

Even though he had a rough childhood he still gave and effort. After his parents got divorced and divorced and he got out of military school he made a good decision to not give up             



I would fix the last sentence. It is hard to read and doesn't make a lot of sense.
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Wait he was a predator to older boys? I thought they were younger.
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j/k ...... it was good , never heard of him tho




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not trying to be mean, but that looks like something i would write in 5th grade.
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JakRox wrote:
Wait he was a predator to older boys? I thought they were younger.



yeah they raped him
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Try rewriting the last sentence, it doesn't make a lot of sense
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Wickedlasers wrote:
not trying to be mean, but that looks like something i would write in 5th grade.


yeah really,is it supposed to be that short?
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