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Dec 01 2006
By: toosneakyforsnake~ I Only Post Everything 1312 posts
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do you like this lyric?

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I created it....it's called Dream girl
 

hey there dream girl
look at me.....look at me
tell me what you're thinking
I know I'm not so perfect
I'm just a dreamer

yeah I'm just a dreamer
I dream for you
do you remember the day we first met
I'll always remember the things
you said about me

I'll never forget those words
you said that night
yet I'm just a dreamer
who dreams of you
I wake up in the morning
thinking about you

why did you have to go away
why'd you have to go with him
but you're my dream girl
I don't understand
understand why you do this to me
don't be a heartbreaker
after all the things we've gone through
give me a chance
I know I'm not perfect
but you're not so perfect too

Yeah I'm a dreamer
I dream of you
I hope you can remember
yeah I hope you can remember the
day we first met
I'll always remember the things you said
about me

I'll never forget those words
you said that night
yet I'm just a dreamer
who dreams about you
I wake up in the morning
thinking of you

you make me sad
you make me happy
don't be a heartbreaker
yeah, I loved you
what did i ever do to
make me deserve this
I'm trying to get to you
but it's like trying to catch
a star

when will I ever wake up from this nightmare
I woke up this morning
knowing that today is the day
that I met you
It's too late to go back
now I'm moving along
moving along
what about you

I'll never forget those words
you said that night
yet I'm just a dreamer
who dreams of you
I wake up in the morining
thinking of you



well I hope you enjoyed the lyrics....what do you think?
IF you guys
have a problem
with the way I'm writing
deal with it
because this is how I do
it
I don't care if you think its dumb
or whatever you ppl say
its my way
not yours

now drop it already
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Fender Bender
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Dec 1, 2006
You say dream to much
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I Only Post Everything
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Dec 1, 2006
why it's too much huh?
IF you guys
have a problem
with the way I'm writing
deal with it
because this is how I do
it
I don't care if you think its dumb
or whatever you ppl say
its my way
not yours

now drop it already
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Dec 1, 2006
i think its pretty good he dont use dreamer too much you see all these pathetic rap songs and all they do is say the same thing over and over and over and make millions off of it
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Dec 1, 2006
LOLERSKATES did you just make this up? .
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Dec 1, 2006
i hate reading lyrics it makes the song sound bad even if its good lyrics, rather listen to the song
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Dec 1, 2006


toosneakyforsnake wrote:
 
what do you think?

 


You've got talent. I may not have liked it, but it's pretty good.
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Dec 1, 2006
LOLERSKATES did you just make this up? .
why? yes I did....made it in just two days with a lot of correction....
IF you guys
have a problem
with the way I'm writing
deal with it
because this is how I do
it
I don't care if you think its dumb
or whatever you ppl say
its my way
not yours

now drop it already
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Dec 1, 2006


HDANNYH wrote:
No
 
I read the First Column thing and got board.


Monopoly, or checkers?
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Dec 1, 2006
you might get shocked from hearing a guy creating a lyric like this but I'm deaf....thought you should know....
IF you guys
have a problem
with the way I'm writing
deal with it
because this is how I do
it
I don't care if you think its dumb
or whatever you ppl say
its my way
not yours

now drop it already
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